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Post by Melodia Inscribis on Feb 21, 2008 18:30:28 GMT -5
Poetry here posted by me. My life breathes and poems foretold. Whenever poems I write, greatness smiles inside humanity. Thanks I express, to the peace of whenever processing into thee. Poem, posted first upon here, inspired by my current name: When The Sky Weeps Dark is the sky, Black is my eye, When the sky weeps! When the sky weeps! All cries, Human dies, When the sky weeps! When the sky weeps! Run from the weeping sky, It loves to terrify, All those beneath, When the sky weeps! When the sky weeps! The rain falls, All hope fails, The sky is dark, The world now wails, When the sky weeps! When the sky weeps! So do I Comments respected. Shine outwardly, from within, be not afraid of expression. More poems to come. Patience is rewarded to all who breathe. So breathe, and await my next rhyme. Thanks I express once again...
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Slater
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Post by Slater on Feb 24, 2008 15:30:03 GMT -5
Wow. That poem seems to have some great depth to it, does it not? Somewhat dark, but very deep and makes you wonder. It pains a picture in my mind, vague in a way. Or like looking at a few seconds of a scene in a movie. Good poem.
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ebannawibo
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Post by ebannawibo on Feb 24, 2008 17:36:56 GMT -5
Have you ever put your writings to music? Your poem makes me wonder what Simon on American Idol would have to say about it if it were put to music.
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Post by Melodia Inscribis on Feb 24, 2008 18:07:42 GMT -5
I have indeed woven my poetry to the delicacy of a tune. It created a hauntingly beautiful wonder. Ones who know me and claim me as their ally express, "You are quite the capable vocalist." I enjoy the sound of my voice, although I do not want to sound expressively confident. American Idol... I do not gaze upon the screen when the show is upon it. The British judge causes me to scoff, something that makes me sad. I have a new poem to express to you members of Eclipse. Flying Colors
Flying colors twirling about, Fly, fly, but don't fly away! Stay here beside me today!
Flying colors, around me they twirl, They take the shape of a boy, then a girl, Fly, fly, but don't fly away! Stay here beside me today!
Blues around me, speaking of depth, Dark colors wrap about me, uttering death,
Pink within me, making me smile, Yellow upon me, glowing all the while,
Purple beneath me, deceitful love, Red above me, gives life a shove,
Colors about me, twirl in formation, Love, deceit, and death within every nation.
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